Writing can be Murder!

Sometimes the decision comes to kill off a character.  I've killed off a number of characters in my time.  In my original version of W.B.S.F., I think there was something like seven people who were knocked off.  Even the final version has about six people dying.  What prompts me to kill off a character?  I think it really comes down to the need to create tension and show that the stakes are high for the main characters.  If no one dies, then is there really the possibility that someone you care about could die?  Are they really in danger?  

I made the decision to kill off a majorish character in W.t.W.W.Y.N. and while it was sad for the characters (and me), I think it was the right decision to create tension and conflict.  So, good-bye to all those killed off characters...you should be happy knowing your death made the story better!

Cutting a Character

When I'm editing, I have found that certain elements that I at first thought were terrific, don't work as well as I had planned.  When I was writing W.B.S.F., there were a number of characters that upon a  later edit I decided were unnecessary.  I also added a new character which has it's own challenges.  

The problem with getting rid of an established character is that you then have to obliterate every reference to that person.  The more involved that character was in the story, the more references that need to be erased.  Plus, I had to make sure the story worked better without them.  Things needed to flow and make sense.  I didn't want the reader to go, "Hmm...something's missing here...what's going on?"  

I've been editing W.t.W.W.Y.N. and have come to the conclusion that I need to get rid of a character.  There's nothing inherently wrong with this character (a spunky FBI agent with a dog and a cat) except that she doesn't fit very well into the story.  I made the decision to focus on the main characters and that didn't leave a lot of room for character growth and involvement for Delia.  On the plus side (and more evidence that she should probably go) was that she's really only in four or five of the first 29 chapters.  That's just not enough to make her important to the story.  By disposing of her character, I'm hoping that I can keep the story tighter around the main characters and keep the story from going in the wrong direction.  

While poor Delia is getting cut out, I still like her character.  She has a unique personality, and I like her, so I'll just file her paragraphs away.  Maybe I'll find a story just for her someday.  

What's in a name?

I named "When the Wind Whispers Your Name" right out of the gate.  I think I'd written less than a chapter when it came to me, and I immediately bestowed it on my lowly story.  Sometimes names just hit me like that.  Other times, not so much.

I try to think of several possible titles for stories, but it can be difficult.  I've recently started contemplating this particular title, and I'm not so sure I like it as much anymore.  Does it really grab me?  Does it have the urgency and depth of the story?  I'm not so sure.  Unfortunately, if I kick it to the curb, that means I have to come up with a new title.  That has me quaking a bit in my boots (really, flats...don't really wear boots, anymore).  What do I call it?  What stands out?  What title would best sum up the story and say to potential readers, "Hey, you, read me!  I'm a good story!  I'll entertain for a few hours."  Hmm...I'm just not sure yet.

new focus

Sometimes the fire burns brightly, and today was a good writing day.  I actually managed to get another 12 chapters of W.t.W.W.Y.N. edited.  I only have another five or six chapters to edit, and then it'll be on to some new stuff.  Hopefully I can keep my focus enough to finish up this book well.  

What I aspire to...

I just re-read the first in the O'Malley series, The Negotiator.  If you haven't read this book by Dee Henderson and you enjoy suspenseful stories with identifiable characters, than this is the book for you.  Miss Henderson does a superb job of creating a story that would launch 6 other books.  I love this series maybe for the pure fact that it makes me want to write.  If you're looking for a good story, pick this one up!

Gotta move, gotta move!

It's been a while since I've been on here.  Sometimes I feel like that proverbial boulder...you know the one...if it doesn't move it gets covered in moss.   A rolling stone can't gather any moss.  I think I've gotten a little covered in moss, which is really just this mind-numbing, blah of mental inactivity.  I too easily allow myself to become numbed to life.  To turn it off or tune it out...to overall let myself fall victim to myself.  I need to shake it off.  I need to put into practice that which comes so easily when I'm driving my car or walking my dog...my imagination!  

the wind out of the balloon

I only have one day until the 60 days are up.  Sadly, I have received neither an acceptance nor a rejection from the agents I sent my manuscript to.  Regardless, it's not done.  Maybe I'll try to think outside of the box.  Okay, Brian...let's talk about e-publishing.