Urgh!

I am trying to edit W.T.W.W.Y.N. but I've come upon a stumbling block.  I feel like I jump too swiftly between scenes and don't know how to fix it.  The problem is that I deleted a whole thread from the story and it was supposed to fit nicely between these two scenes.  But now that it's gone, I'm at a loss.  I feel like it's too abrupt, but I'm not sure how to fix it.

Also, do I add more danger in here?  I want to start transitioning into the third and final act, but the story isn't cooperating.  It drives me crazy!!!!!! 

Update:

Okay...so I fixed part of the problem by switching the order of a couple of chapters and deleting a whole other chapter.  Now, I just need to add some action because everything's getting a little bogged down in narrative.