Chapter 32: A new direction

I went back in my editing process of W.t.W.W.Y.N. and changed it up a bit. I also completely changed the direction of the story. Hopefully this will reap myriad benefits in character development and moving the plot along. My original #32 was boring and lacked energy. I felt like the characters had run out of steam a mere 50 feet from the finish line. That is not the way a story should feel. But, now with a little danger and fear, I've ramped up the story and given the characters more to do. I'm really hoping this will help me to push through to the end of this particular story. I want to know how this ends, and I want to see it happen. Soon.